Please do everyone a favor and study anatomy before attempting this type of artwork. You need the lessons pretty badly. Otherwise, not bad on coloring, though you could use some lighting lessons, too.

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What makes you think I'm trying to do anyone a favor? I do art strictly as a hobby. I don't use any references to keep things challenging. Also this is incomplete so quit pretending you know what I need.

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Suit yourself, but damn. Pull that stick out of your ass, sweetie. If you post something on a public forum, it's going to get commented on and the commenter doesn't have to be nice. What I said is true, if blunt.
That's why it's called 'critique'. Even a hobby artist should know that.

And never using a reference to help learn a new pose or body shape is absurd, in my opinion, but to each their own, I guess.

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Nice. You're very good at rendering torsos and arses. Sure using references is useful, but drawing sans references is good practice too. I recommend a bit of both, and mostly what you enjoy.

Your character reminds me a bit of the girl from Golden Axe, but a bit cooler.

Saying something like "This is all wrong, you suck" is not a critique. If you weren't such a low life you'd know that. There's my truthful "critque" of you.

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I actually gave you some advice along with my opinion. I.e study anatomy and lighting. But if you want to throw the baby out with the bathwater and act like a petulant child, knock yourself out. Ciao.

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I wouldn't have been so "petulant" if you weren't running your mouth like an insolent bitch.

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Insolent. Riiiight. Okay, hon. Cute.
I was being something that you are obviously unfamiliar with. It's called being "brutally honest". If you can't handle someone coming by on a public forum to crit on work that you have up on that public forum, then you're the one with issues, not I. Put it on 'critique not desired' or something; then you can bitch when someone points out the flaws in your art. I don't have to be nice and pet your ego with it. And frankly? I could've been a lot worse.
Either way. What I said was right and you've just got yourself in a knot over it. The insulting and cursing you throw at me tells me how hyper-defensive you are. Take my advice or leave it. I don't really care. You said you're just a hobbyist, so any methods you use are ultimately up to you and your view of your skill level, no matter how backwards they are.
Anyway. Throw a temper tantrum, but on your own time, sweetie. I'm done trying to help you. See you around.

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Yes insolent. You're just an amatuer and you try to come off as being so high and mighty telling people not to draw certain types of pictures and that they need lessons. And no you didn't insult me, you simply disgusted me with your screwed up attitude.

Once again learn the differnece between throwing insults at people and critiqueing art. As for the record bitch doesn't count as profanity anymore, that's why it's used on regular TV.

What you need is to take some classes in etiquette and English so that you'll understand what you're saying. There, now I'm done helping you to become a decent person.

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